Music Magazine Contents Page Mock Up 3

This mock up is my final mock up for the contents page. This design again is not well suited for my target audience as the image again dominate the page which leaves less room for content which leads me to believe the right balance of text and images is needed in this magazine otherwise the contents page is overwhelmed with one or the other. The content on the side is good with I shrink the text to fit more in for the reader but I feel that it be best positioned on the left side to make it easier to read for the reader thus enticing to read it as it would be so easy to read. It would be easy to read if it was on the left because the reader always starts on the left because that is how everybody reads. The bottom was meant to have a voucher like a rip out voucher you see on other magazines. This feature would of created more content for the reader and as a result make the magazine look far more professional and atheistic to the reader.