Music Magazine Double Page Spread Mock Up 2

This is the second mock up for the double page spread. This design is not the one that should be sed in the final production because the text is all clumped up together which make the whole content look boring and will deter anybody from reading the pages because who reads a magazine with massive blocks of text? No one. You read a magazine for short amounts of text, colour and images because otherwise you may as well be reading a book about the artist like his/her autobiography. The images are in good positions but the top banner with the four images is not good because some of the images are distorted and the rest of the page seems bare. This design is okay but again it will need more colour and the text will need extra formatting to make the magazine seem more atheistic.