Music Magazine Contents Page Mock Up 2

This is my second mock up for the contents page. It follows the same colour scheme of white and purple and having the main images of the artist dominate the main page This design does not target my target audience because the design is very vague in it' content as there is not enough room for content so the magazine page does not tell the audience anything important concerning the artist which is the reason why they probably purchased the magazine. the images as well take up too much space so it limits the content and answers none of the questions given by the reader such as "which page is the featured artist on?". This design is clearly not the best for the magazine in a different way as well, the design looks more like a pop magazine whilst this magazine is meant to be a alternative/indie rock magazine. This design would not suit my target audience and thus deter them from purchasing and/or reading the magazine.