Final Music Magazine Double Page Spread Feedback

The Double page spread received not the best feedback in terms of the design because the text on the image on the left side of the page faded into the image and covered some crucial features of the model so the feedback suggested that this needed to be changed so that the magazine would look more professional to the target audience. The background for the text on the right hand side does not suit the main image which was made clear to me so I will change that so that the target audience is not deterred from continuing to read the magazine. However, the magazine text detailing in the artist that is featured in the magazine was, according to the feedback, very good because it really reflects the target audience and their taste in music which was a primary aim during the production of the double page spread.