Music Magazine Double Page Spread Flat Plan 2

Here is my second flat plan for the double page spread. The design is very built upon the text that details in the artist so the reader would have to be very interested in the artist to read through all the text that is about them. As well the image are quite few so the page is dominantly text which is and can be very boring to the reader so the magazine doesn't quite appeal to the target audience already as they would prefer colours and images to go with text. This flat plan does the opposite. There is nothing in this flat plan that truly appeals to the target audience so the reader would most doubt ably be deterred from reading through the article.