Music Magazine Mock Up Feedback

Front Cover Mock Ups
The feedback received from my target audience was promising and very insightful and will help greatly in the final production of the front cover. The feedback claims that the second mock up was the best because it allowed the stories to be made more clear to the reader which makes it easier for them to make the judgment to read the magazine or not. The audience said the mock up gave the stories up and front to the reader which is good because it highlighted the stories and gave the features clear visibility which answers the questions the reader gets. The feedback also suggested that the second mock up had great potential as it could easily be filled with regular magazine features such as a header for issue numbers and top news about the magazine which will add content to the front cover and make it appear more aesthetic. The other two mock ups apparently had the stories on the front but they wasn't made as clear but the thing that suggested that the second mock up was better because it had more potential.

Contents Page Mock Ups
The content page feedback was again insightful as it claimed that the first mock up had more potential and was easier to read. The main point of the feedback was that the first mock up is clearer to read which seems to be the need for my targets audience as it appears fancy designs which breaks away from the traditional designs and structures of a contents page. To please my target audience which is very important, the first mock up will be easier for them to read because the text is on the left and stays on the left which is how everybody reads. The feedback also suggested that the first mock needed more content and colours on it which will need to be sorted out during final production.

Double Page Spread Mock Ups
The double page spread mock up feedback was useful as always but it appears that my target audience did not prefer any of them as they found all of them to be good if there as more content and colour then the either of three would suffice. With this feedback and the feedback from the other mock ups I have concluded that the first mock up is the best because it holds the most potential for my magazine in term of content and design.