Music Magazine Double Page Spread Mock Up 1

This is my first mock up for the double page spread.  This design is suited for my target audience as it gives information about the artist but the text formatting could developed more into a magazine format with different paragraphs around the page to make the magazine look more atheistic to the reader and make it look like there is less content to read. The page is very plain in colour which will have to be sorted out in the final double page spread because the page looks boring and will not entertain the reader enough for him/her to read on through the magazine so more colour will be needed to the magazine. The images are alright where they are but they will need to be re-positioned into a more fitting format as they both look out of place as they don't correlate with each other. This will make the magazine look unprofessional and to entertaining to the reader so this will need to be sorted out whilst producing the final product.